Suchoritashu Brishti,
Aamar prathom prem--bhalobasha. Ei abelay eshe toke etai hoyto ba prathom o shesh chithi. Tor khaborer ashay aaj atharo bachor apekkhay. Chander jale bhije bhije koto raat aar katabo bolte parish? Narom chander aloye jonak jala raat aar toke dekhano holo na. Shei neem phooler gandho makhano path, duronto haway kapale lepte thaka chul, tor tol pora gaaler dushtu-mishti hashi---smritir jhapi khullei jhapta mare mukhe. Ekrash bokulphooler gandhobahi mon shob mone koriye dey. Nirjon akash theke shunnotar kuasha aar shapner guro pere niye makhiye niyechi shara shorire..janish? Janish kono mon kharap kora bhore shonali roddur mariye, kurchi phooler gandho booke niye nodike boli grahon koro. Etodin dhore er cheye aar beshi ki ba korar chilo?
Tor ki mone pore shei shob shona jhora din guloke? Bolechilam jodi ekbaar du haat barash…..prithibir shob shoundorjo tokei debo. Aar ekbaar tui bolechili “Bhalobashar patro ke bhuleo biye korte nei; korlei nijeder kache ajantei purono hoye jete hoy”. Bodh hoy purono hote chashni, tai ki hariye geli?? Tobe tor sharthohin, shachhotoya bhalobasha amake ashamapto shukhanubhuti dey….aajo. Bhabte bhalo laage ekbaar ek borshar dupure aamar haat chuye bolechili “Megh tui na thakle aamar janmoi britha.” Abak chokhe takate bolechili “dur boka, megh thekei to brishtir janmo…….tai na?”
Bohu bachor bade tor thikana pelam Riti-r kache. Mone ache Riti-ke? Goto boimelay dekha hoye gelo hothat. Shunlam deshe phirchish bidesh theke agami shite. Eto gulo bachore boimela o rather mela theke tor janno kichu na kichu kine rekhechi………..jodi kono din dekha hoy. Abshyo kono kono manusher kapal i emon je shopner porira tader jibone ashena kono din. Amake bhalo thakar moto ekta ratri dibi Brishti? Shapno laga oi kaalo akashtar moto….tar bodole aami debo anek kobita, ekta laal golaper chara aar holud ronga duto bodrika……chelebela theke ja tor priyo chilo. Deshe phire kono ek mon kharap kora bikele chole ashish dhirpaye, didhahin…ekbaar. Tor megh ekhono besh ashushtho tor protikhhay. Ki re ashbi naa??? Aare paagli, aamake na hok -----manush to ashukh dekhteo ashe.
Tor kono ek kaaler hariye jaoa
Khelar shathi---bondhu---bhalobasha…..
“Megh”
8 comments:
Mind blowing ..... i cant express in words .. simply !!! its awesome .... Archan u r a genius ...!!
janina re ki bolbo....onek smriti sopno asha bedonar ek mormosporshi sattata...etai jibon...thoth e ek bhejal miththa hasir arale lukono betha bedona jala jontrona
ei matro porlam. ki bolbo???? Kuri bachor aager nijier aayna dekhte pacchilaam.du chokh bhore jachhilo.ekta katha boli--Indranil, shudhu tumi eka na, aneki aache e pather jatri,jani na keno kichu manush nijer aapon jan ke keno eto tibro o sarajiboner jantrona dei.
jodi paro reply dio.
btw...i dnt know who u r...
nyz...tumi indranil bole kake uddeshho korecho ami jani na....
shudhu eituku bolte pari je ei lekhar rochoyita indranil noy...
bhalo theko...aro comments dio...
ei chithita ki tui likhechish???? kichu balar nei, just asadharan,asadharan ar asadharan!!!! khub khub bhalo... keep it up!!!! get going............
eta ektu besi kabbik hoe geche,amar tai mone hoe..........
but sei kabbo tao khub khub sundur,oboso moner kotha bises kore koster kotha bojhate gele kabbo hoeto ektu esei pore,taieta thik e ache,keep it up
thnx both to sumana and paulami..
for ur nice and valuable comments
i think amr comments , compliments kichui dewa uchit na coz m not worth of it. m just speechless. u r simply great. i hope tor ei likhte parar khomotar chhite photao amar modhe thakto!
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